Blocked :(

I haven't written anything fictional in a while. I'm stuck on the story - don't really like the dialogue at the end of the last segment. Having a hard time believing guys even have hearts (except Ken, of course, who is an anomalie). I'm hoping my trip to Thailand and it's neighbours inspires me again. I'd really like to finish this story. I want to know what happens ;)

If anyone has feedback on the previous sections of story, I'd love to hear it...